A really well composed piece, the colours are really strong and vibrant, really adding to the impact of the piece. I love the way you have not succumbed to the traditional rainbow, and have opted to come up with your own, unique colour scheme, really contributing to the originality of the piece. Truly awe-inspiring. I would like to say this though, perhaps you could perhaps move the camera out a bit so that the subject does not flood the screen quiet so much. However, saying that, the close proximity of the target, again, adds to the impact, drawing the character's into the emotion of the subject. This is then complemented by the 'Industrialised tears' and hand positions, really creating the motif of sorrow and grief.