It´s a very beautiful portrait but with reference to the originality of the image would have more impacted using colored lenses to not draw attention to the eye, and highlight more makeup and hair. The edition of the skin is good, it shows a slight texture smoothing to remove imperfections that may have the model without that "plastic" feeling on the skin.
About the lighting, I think it's very intense, clear expressions of the face giving a feeling of overhead lighting. Maybe I can help you work the next time with a ring of light or a beauty.
Regarding expression and posse for the model reminds me to the ying yang about how her hair and hands makes the balance, great composition.