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Antoinette by ariadnese Antoinette by ariadnese
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Hey :)

You wanted me to give my two cents to this portrait.

Photographically:
Brilliant. I'm not near a skill level where I can help you or come with tips here. The framing and focus is very very good :)

Post-processing:
At this level you're at the only thing I'd consider is to add some sharpening to the jewelry surrounding her eyes to have a gradual zoning from sharp to soft.
I would also consider brightening her nostrals just a tiny bit due to the pose. The reason is that the eyes and lips/mouth are so sharp and contrasty that the dark nostrals kinda disturbs the beauty a little.

As always you keep a very high standard at this. Keep it up :)

Hope this was helpful, eventhough it wasn't much at all :)
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Every time you step behind your lens you produce work that surpasses anything I've seen on any magazine or billboard. Continue producing fine work like this and soon you won't have to ghetto-rig your gear anymore ;D

Excellent color choices. Great make-up. Superb editing.

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TwistedLolita Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Photographer
I absolutely love your work! May I ask what camera you use? Some of your work says a D90 but was wondering if you use another camera type as well? I am looking to upgrade my camera and your works quality always speaks so much to me!
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ariadnese Featured By Owner May 7, 2014   Photographer
Yup I just use the D90, I've had it for about 3 years, nothing special :)
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blanket86 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful! Very nice style! I love it!
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BlackHeresy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wonderful shot ^^
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Arjo62 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing, really fantastic! :)
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duzetdaram Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
It looks wonderful. Just you need to blend or/and give sharp to the jewelry and it will looks more natural and shining. Keep going
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XxMindlessArtxX Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very pretty and elegant! :D
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MichaelGarcia7 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional Writer
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mn63 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Beautiful work.
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net-and-tinsel-gown Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Orchids, jewels, feathers and a beautiful young lady to set them all off- what more can one want? This is magnificent. :)
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